Reddawn
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Join date : 2011-04-23
 |  Subject: Reddawn's Creation  Sat Apr 23, 2011 2:29 pm | |
| Name: Reddawn Gender: Female Age: Nineteen Moons Rank: Warrior Description or Pic: - Spoiler:
Personality: While she is very brave and straight forward most of the time, she can be a tease. She's clever and has a very motherly attitude to kits. RP Sample: Reddawn padded through the reeds, her paws lifting lightly one after the other. There was no light, the moon was lost in the sky, but it was in her nature to creep the shadows. She did not require the white glow to guide her. Her eyes adjusted to the dark. She was one with the night. Oh look, there's the mouse from the last rp sample! The red she-cat crept forward, waiting until she was close enough for the catch, then sprang forward. She clasped the prey within her claws; Before the small creature could let out an alarm, she ended it's life with a swift bite to the neck. | |
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Pinestar
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| | Subject: Re: Reddawn's Creation Sat Apr 23, 2011 2:31 pm | |
| Er.. Uncertain.. The RP Sample is a little short.. add at least 1 more sentence :3 | |
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Icestar
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Join date : 2011-04-23
| | Subject: Re: Reddawn's Creation Sat Apr 23, 2011 2:37 pm | |
| join Windclan!!! members desperately needed!!! XD | |
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Pinestar
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| | Subject: Re: Reddawn's Creation Sat Apr 23, 2011 2:38 pm | |
| .3.''
anyway... great rp sample!! ^3^
APPRO-CADABRA!! | |
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